So I decided to write this a few months ago after reading Adam Atherton (Oysterboy)'s "artist seeking writer" post, fully intending to write something he might enjoy drawing. Upon finishing it I realized it didn't really suit his art style at all, so I just kept it in reserve in case something came along. I've been fiddling around with it lately, posted it on Penciljack. Figured I'd see if any of you guys had an opinion. Somewhere in there is a line of dialogue in brackets which I haven't decide...